This section contains three pages of
content:
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Scholarship Essay One
- Crabiel
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Scholarship Essay Two
- National Merit Scholar
Scholarship Essay One
CRABIEL SCHOLARSHIP WINNER - won $3,000
scholarship
Like Mr. Crabiel, I literally work
tirelessly in many academic and leadership
roles. I sleep no more than six hours a
night because of my desire to expertly meet
my many commitments. Throughout my life, I
have worked as long and as hard as I
possibly can to effect beneficial changes in
both school and society.
During the summer of tenth grade, I took a
number theory course at Johns Hopkins
University with students from Alaska,
California, and Bogota, Colombia. Similarly,
during the summer following eleventh grade,
I was one of ninety students from New Jersey
selected to attend the Governor's School in
the Sciences at Drew University. At Drew, I
took courses in molecular orbital theory,
special relativity, cognitive psychology,
and I participated in an astrophysics
research project. For my independent
research project, I used a telescope to find
the angular velocity of Pluto. With the
angular velocity determined, I used
Einstein's field equations and Kepler's laws
to place an upper bound on the magnitude of
the cosmological constant, which describes
the curvature of space and the rate of the
universe's expansion.
In
addition to learning science, I recently
lectured physics classes on special
relativity at the request of my physics
teacher. After lecturing one class for 45
minutes, one student bought many books on
both general and special relativity to read
during his study hall. Inspiring other
students to search for knowledge kindles my
own quest to understand the world and the
people around me.
As
president of the National Honor Society, I
tutor students with difficulties in various
subject areas. In addition, I am ranked
number one in my class with an SAT score of
1580 and SATII scores of 750 in math, 760 in
writing, and 800 in physics. In school, I
take the hardest possible courses including
every AP course offered at the high school.
I am the leading member of the Math Team,
the Academic Team, and the Model Congress
Team. In the area of leadership, I have
recently received the Rotary Youth
Leadership Award from a local rotary club,
have been asked to attend the National Youth
Leadership Forum on Law and the Constitution
in Washington D.C., and wrote the winning
essay on patriotism for South Plainfield's
VFW chapter. Currently enrolled in Spanish
6,I am a member of both the Spanish Club and
the Spanish Honor Society. In addition, I
recently was named a National Merit Scholar.
Besides involvement in academic and
leadership positions, I am active in
athletics. For instance, I lift weights
regularly. In addition, I am the captain of
my school's varsity tennis team. So far this
year, my individual record on the team is
3-0.
Working vigorously upon being elected
Student Council President, I have begun a
biweekly publication of student council
activities and opinions. Also, the executive
board under my direction has opened the
school store for the first time in nearly a
decade. With paint and wood, we turned a
janitor's closet into a fantastic store. I
also direct many fund raisers and charity
drives. For instance, I recently organized a
charity drive that netted about $1,500 for
the family of Alicia Lehman, a local girl
who received a heart transplant.
As
Student Liaison to the South Plainfield
Board of Education, I am working to
introduce more advanced-placement courses,
more reading of philosophy, and more math
and science electives into the curriculum.
At curriculum committee meetings, I have
been effective in making Board members aware
of the need for these courses. In addition,
my speeches at public Board meetings often
draw widespread support, which further helps
to advance my plans for enhancing the
curriculum.
I
have also been effective as a Sunday school
teacher. By helping elementary school
students formulate principles and morals, I
make a difference in their lives every week.
The value system that I hope to instill in
them will last them their entire lives. I
find teaching first-graders about Christ
extremely rewarding.
Clearly, I have devoted my life both to
working to better myself and to improving
civilization as a whole. Throughout the rest
of my life, I hope to continue in this same
manner of unselfish work. Just as freeholder
Crabiel dedicates his life to public
service, I commit my life to helping others
and to advancing society's level of
understanding.
Scholarship Essay Two
WINNING NATIONAL MERIT SCHOLAR ESSAY
Nothing in all the world is comparable to
reading Ayn Rand beneath New York's skyline
or to studying Nietzsche atop a mountain
summit.
Since childhood, the studies of philosophy
and science have interested me profoundly.
Having read many books on relativity,
quantum mechanics, existentialism, religion,
capitalism, democracy and post-Aristotelian
philosophy, my quest for knowledge has only
intensified. Certainly, the purpose of my
life is to discover a greater understanding
of the universe and its people.
Specifically, I plan to better grasp the
interrelationship among forces, matter,
space, and time. In addition, I hope to find
a unified field theory and a convincing
explanation for the birth of the universe.
During the summer of tenth grade, I took a
number theory course at Johns Hopkins
University with students from Alaska,
California, and Bogota, Colombia. My
attendance of the New Jersey Governor's
School in the Sciences is another
accomplishment that exemplifies my
dedication to knowledge. During the summer
following eleventh grade, I took courses in
molecular orbital theory, special
relativity, cognitive psychology, and I
participated in an astrophysics research
project. For my independent research
project, I used a telescope to find the
angular velocity of Pluto. With the angular
velocity determined, I used Einstein's field
equations and Kepler's laws to place an
upper bound on the magnitude of the
cosmological constant, which describes the
curvature of space and the rate of the
universe's expansion.
In addition to learning science, I recently
lectured physics classes on special
relativity at the request of my physics
teacher. After lecturing one class for 45
minutes, one student bought many books on
both general and special relativity to read
during his study hall. Inspiring other
students to search for knowledge kindles my
own quest to understand the world and the
people around me.
Also, as president of the National Honor
Society, I tutor students with difficulties
in various subject areas. Moreover, I am
ranked number one in my class, and I am the
leading member of the Math Team, the
Academic Team, and the Model Congress Team.
In the area of leadership, I have recently
received the Rotary Youth Leadership Award
from a local rotary club and have been asked
to attend the National Youth Leadership
Forum on Law and the Constitution in
Washington D.C. Currently enrolled in
Spanish 6,I am a member of both the Spanish
Club and the Spanish Honor Society.
As student council president, I have begun a
biweekly publication of student council
activities and opinions. Also, the executive
board under my direction has opened the
school store for the first time in nearly a
decade and is finding speakers to speak at a
series of colloquia on topics ranging from
physics to politics. Directing fund raisers
and charity drives also consumes much of my
time. For instance, I recently organized a
charity drive that netted about $1,500 for
the family of a local girl in need of a
heart transplant.
Consistent with my love of freedom and my
belief in democracy, which is best
summarized by Hayek's Road to Serfdom, I
have recently initiated an application to
become the liaison to the local board of
education. Also, in keeping with my belief
that individuals develop strong principles
and ideology, I teach Sunday school three
months a year and have chaperoned for a
local Christian school.
Outside pure academics and leadership roles,
I lift weights five times a week for an hour
each day. In addition, I play singles for my
school's varsity tennis team. Because I find
extraordinary satisfaction in nature and
have dedicated my life to its understanding,
I enjoy mountain climbing. Among the notable
peaks I have reached are Mt. Washington, Mt
Jefferson, Mt. Madison, Mt. Marcy and Mt.
Katahdin. Unquestionably, my life's aim is
to dramatically raise the height of the
mountain of knowledge so that my successors
may have a more accurate view of the
universe around them. |